Hellooo

As of now everyone is working on either/or which follows:

Ines M.: Twenty-Seven Dresses/Panic! CD

Ariela Z.: Flo Rida’s CD/ other CDs

Natalie A.: Punk Goes Crunk!

Joselyn M.: 21 Movie/Concerts

Carlos M.: Streetlight Manifesto/ Juno

PLEASE, leave me a not verifying which article you have been & are going to be sticking with until final drafts. Planners & First Drafts are due FRIDAY.. most of you have started : )

Below are more story ideas which could be covered. If you have anymore ideas or suggestions leave a comment or a note & I’ll add it to the list! Thanks!

- Jazz & Rock Ensemble go to New York

- Ultra Music Festival

- Michael Jackson & Kanye West CD

- Local shows of bands from school

Publication Drafts with Students’ Final Drafts

publication-draft-of-jonas-brothers-concert.doc

final-draft-of-jonas-brothers-concert.doc

calle-ocho.doc

calle-och1.doc

publication-new-super-smash-brothers-brawl-by-oscar-t.doc

supersmashbrosbrwl.doc

Articles I’ve Written With Planners and Reflections

amazon-kindle-all-drafts-planners-in-order.doc

photography-department.doc

midmark-reflection.doc

end-of-quarter-reflectio.doc

cleanliness.doc (C. Spread for Miriam)

Hello, Writers! Since this week is FCAT week, we do not have class until Friday or next Monday. I have printed your article planners and am putting them back in the tackle box today. It is up to all writers to pick up their planners and see what needs work. If you need to contact me for anything, and it’s too much to mention (or discuss, rather) in a comment, it is completely okay to call and ask. I understand that comments limit our leeway sometimes. Thank you guys so much for your cooperation. Let’s create a great section for a great issue!

Hello! Today, I am presenting my article about the Photography Department here at Beach, and am hoping that you guys have some good suggestions: ). I know my article is lacking quotes and needs a few more pieces of information which I will gather by the end of the week. Do you have any other suggestions?

photo-article.doc

Secondly, I would like to let you all know that I am the Art& Entertainment Editor again, and I would like to branch out and ask about what has been being written when I was gone/Jo took place as editor. There aren’t many articles up, or atleast articles of great interest which are relative to what students in school actually entertain themselves with. Definitely more has to be done in order to acheive interesting, exciting pieces that people really want to read. I have only thought about a few things I can do to get people writing more interesting articles, and that is to include an upcomping events sidebar on the A&E page and/or to just talk about and encourage other writers to write about events that you’ve been to. Be informative and suggestive so we can have more people knowing what is going and what should primarily be written.

Thank you! I hope you all enjoyed my presentation : P.

This is an planner for an article that I am writing about the Photography Department at MB High:

photo-dept-planner.doc

Upcoming Articles

Oscar T: Super Smash Brothers Release Review

Maria P: Jonas Brothers Concert Review

Daniela G: Calle Ocho Festivities and Contests

Ines M: Gallery Walk?

A List Articles

Oscar T: Amy Winehouse/ Grammys

Maria P: Step Up 2 Movie Review

Daniela G: Apple TV Review

These are all of the articles written in the past two weeks. The Arts& Entertainment Section is lacking articles:/. 

Writers!:

Spruce up and really edit your articles. Think about it… your names get published next to these articles! Also, think up new article topics that are more relevant to what people are doing. There are events that people actually go to that have happened which nobody reported on: Marley fest, art shows… really brainstorm, guys! Thanks a billion!

I will be working on two articles, one about the photography department here at Beach and about the new Amazon Kindle.

I am here, so do not hesitate to send me any articles you might like to receive help with editing. I’d be more than glad to : p

FOR ROBERTA:

 primary-elections-ae-2.doc 

miami-international-book-fair-az-d1.doc

american-ganster-az-d1.doc

chris-brown-vv-d1.doc

sawdust-the-killers-ae-d1.doc

(P.S. I am here if you have any questions/need any help)

Hello,

     I would like to inform you all about an event going on all across Miami Beach. Sleepless Night takes place on the night of the next time change, on November 3. Cultural events will be spread across Miami Beach, going on for thirteen hours from 6pm-6am. It would be great to cover this event, possibly one of the biggest events going down in Miami this year. Free shuttle buses provide transportation. Everything else is also free. Visit http://www.sleeplessnight.org/ to learn more, or contact me.

Remember! We meet on Friday.

In addition, below are the edits of the first drafts of your articles. they have been there for a while. Add or change and information you need to if you want your articles on the school site. Where are the second drafts??

d1-gone-baby-gone-2-ae.doc

d1-dan-in-real-life-ae.doc

d1-eve-review-vv.doc

d1-graduation-review-kanye-west-az.doc